assignment reminder for Friday

Just to reiterate, so that there is no confusion like today, for Friday, please bring one copy of your conclusion paragraph (read Hacker pages 15-17), and two more paragraphs of your choosing for your peers to edit (for example: your introduction and one body paragraph, or two body paragraphs.) Also, to turn in to me, please bring one of the above paragraphs which you have edited to be ALL in active voice (no passive, so look out for forms of "to be", like is, was were, am, are, etc.) This paragraph should also contain a transition sentence as it would appear in your paper (read Hacker, 33 - 35 for transitions). Finally, don't forget that the grammar worksheets are due by Friday.